This weeks learning was about the game in 2021! I HOPE YOU ENJOY!
This week we learned that some people want skateboarding to be in olympic and we had to make a new character of minecraft! I really enjoyed making the new character! (I made a butterfly!) And I was happy to learn new games too!
What game character will you make?
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Hi Hana, thanks for sharing your work with us. Here is some feedback for you in each subject.
ReplyDeleteREADING
- I can see that you are beginning to quote/ use evidence from the articles to support your thinking. This is a good start. For question 1a, have a look at the last sentence in the third paragraph on slide 8. For some skateboarders, they use their tricks to tell others how they feel. Why might the Olympics change this?
MATHS
Your pie chart looks very interesting, I was surprised to see how much time we actually spend working and sleeping. Was there something that surprised you?
WRITING
Lots of good techniques here. I like that you used repetition of 'you creepers' to really show that Minecraft players can get annoyed at how they destroy their world. Good use of rhyme (e.g. house, mouse), rhetorical questions and alliteration too (e.g. wake, wonder).
Love your minecraft butterfly and flower, very pretty!